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• Wednesday, February 13, 2008 - Poem/Story my 10 yo DD wrote

Posted in MN's writing

Love

by MN age 10

You are a baby goat

that is sick and cold,

blind, hungry and lonely

you are crying, you are

beaten, and fooled.

No one looks at you

they snort, butt you

kick you, and looks

at you with a hard

eye it pierces you.

It rains, snows, and

hails as it pounds your coat.

Finally someone

sees you it is raining

then.  She gets up and rushes toward you

your body tenses.

She does not beat

or kick.  She cleans you,

warms you, and feeds

you.  She makes a

shelter under her

belly, and she has

a soft eye

she sees

inside of you

she thinks you

are special. When

a enemy comes

she will push you

into safety.  One

day she died

you cry and 'cry

over her blood

shed.  She

died for you

and only you

She said I

will love

you my dear. and

she cries  "It

is over!" Her name is Jesus

 

Mom's comments:  I am not sure about Jesus in the female, but given her abuse history, maybe this is "safer" for her at this point in time.  I did think it powerful.  Maybe that is just the mom in me.  I typed it as she had it written out.  She called it a poem, but it is more of a story I think. 

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• Wednesday, February 13, 2008 - Poem

Posted by Anonymous
Don't worry about the Jesus. As you say, it might be safer, but I don't think that He cares, especially since He came as He did so we and those at that time could understand Him.
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• Friday, February 15, 2008 - Wow!

Posted by SpinningMommy
That is some seriously powerful stuff from a 10 y.o. It's good that she can pour it out in her writing. God bless her.
Kim
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Just want to share the joys and tears of living in the country with others that understand them both. I am mom to 5 children. Two biological and three adopted. We are praying for one more adopted soon. We live 40 miles from town on 117 acres. My days are full of homeschooling children and dealing with livestock. Life is never dull or boring or "normal" what ever normal is. I ramble on here often, some times more than once a day as this is my main form of socialization with adults during the day. Hope to make some new friends here.

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